New Age Rennaissance

Thanks to Bud for the inspiration.

Words weave sounds into magic
quiet we call for our slavery
we claim we're old, we say we're sick
I call it stupid, you call it bravery
not anymore, a fresh start is required
file all old memories, let them go
if freedom should be acquired
let there be no judgement, no foe.

New age renaissance is coming
not a moment too soon nor too late
I can hear it as a humming
let us all patiently wait.

Author's Note

Ignore bad grammar

Reviews

[Sarah]

Interesting poem - I understand the main idea and the moral of the poem, but I'll probably have to read it a few times to fully get everything. XD Nice job, this was an entertaining read. :)

[Voice11]

Nice poem. I like the visuals. Great job!

[Violeta]

Nice; yet it might bee a little too idealistic, potent, and complex for simple minded people... they might just not get it ... what a shame. If asked to describe the poem using one word I would say: "demanding", sounds to me like there is a huge need of change and I agree.

CHALLANGE: try writing something as demanding as this, but use emotions describe feelings, sensations... like the urge for things to be different or disgust provoked by society (those feelings are mine, I am just using them as an example) it would add power to the piece and i would LOVE to read it.

[Elmij Jim]

I didnt understand a word you say, but I read it the same.

[Läin]

A new order to come, great poem, it keeps you thinking about what may truly happen in the future.

[Neg]

I agree with "Twilight" more of a statement than a poem but different and Its very good. Thanks for posting another great piece of work. Great job!!!!

[Safren]

New age renaissance is comming, simply great!

[Legion]

It couldn't get here fast enough. I like this message. Throw out the old. Embrace the new. Kudos.