To Whom It Concerns

Written in 2009.

I wander the vast deserts of my mind
Dying of thirst, longing for life

I swim the flooded rivers of my emotions
Drowning in their overflowing

I clamber up the steep crags in the ravine of my dispair
Falling back to the depths

I exolore the deep cave of my heart
Crushed in its colapse

I sleep in my death's embrace
Icy fingers wrap my soul

You...shining in the corner of my eye
Dare I hope?

Reviews

[C. Porter]

Ooh, nice one. I thought it was just going to be a feeling so much poem, but its a love poem at hte end, too. Interesting, short and sweet. Great job!! Kudos!

[SilentDreamer]

Very nice. Interesting write. It flows well with imagery. Awesome job, unique write. Keep writing. :D

[deeps]

I sleep in my death's embrace
Icy fingers wrap my soul
You...shining in the corner of my eye
Dare I hope?

Loved these lines here,
This is very well written and such a wonderful flow of wrods.
very well stated!

[AmeliaElizabeth]

This is awesome!! It's got a really great structure. Good work!