In a summer room of your heart.

in the summer room
of one's heart
sits another
basking in the glow
of love's beams,
birds chirp in harmonies
that only two sets of ears hear,
flowers bloom in ravenous colours
all around the open windows
to the sweetly scented air,
and a passionate kiss that hangs
like a morning glory
trumpets the joy
of the season of love
to share such a room
in your heart,
to open it up
not to be trampled on
but gently danced across,
to feel the weight
of a carefree soul
lingering for the pleasure
of sharing you,
and the soft caress
of extra beats that thump
in time to the long
gentle caresses rendered..
it is a tough choice,
a turning point
for those who have been
burned by scorn
and loss before
but what a risk
if you succeed,
what a gain
if it comes true,
what value can be placed on
"I Love You."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

This is so lovely my friend. It brought to my mind amazing thoughts. Bravo!

[Patrick]

This is a beautiful piece. I am impressed with this! it flows wonderfully and has great imagery.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

So very descriptive! It sets quite the scene

[Mary Bosworth]

So nicely conveyed! This is flowing and tender and beautiful. The genuine feelings trickle down the page like soft rain, so natural. Love this

[Matching Socks]

So wonderful and honest. Just flows off the lips so beautifully.

[Mary C]

This is a dream to read. it flows with such ease, and is truly beautiful.

[Anne Timmins]

This is just beautiful. Good job

[John Anderson]

This is very unique and full of raw emotion. Great job!

[yuki]

wow this is great really like this! :D

[R Smith]

what a beautiful poem, in this summer room where we all must wish one day to be, excellent poem.