Nocturnal Transmissions

we do journey on a wisp of a dream
across universes of thoughts
never explored at waking,
into realms only the inner mind
can stand and analyze,
and we are no longer human there
but dream walkers who can do
almost anything we'd like...
till the mourning calls us back
to the reality of a stiff inflexible
shell that holds us down
until we part again the following night

Reviews

[Mary Bosworth]

beautiful and thought provoking

[Sometimes Blood]

wow! You can write so beautifully and it flows effortlessly

[Ashira Macy]

I love the astral imagery in this one. Dreams can be such a wonderful thing, taking us on adventures that we would never attempt during the day.

[Realm of Thoughts]

For everything is free in dream. So nice write and so true as I loved reading it.

[Blake Fodor]

This read touching and deep all in one fluid stroke.

[Anne Timmins]

What a fantastic piece. I simply loved this

[Cory Barrett]

the most comfortable thing to see is the back of my eyelids.

[Briana O'Connor]

I love this. I dream a lot of scary dreams, but once I awake, I find my slumberous imagination to be brilliant and creative. Dreams are the miracles of the night, where we can journey away for a little while and dive into the depths of another dimension. You expressed these words with such vivid emotion. I enjoyed the way you used discrete metaphors to pique the imagination even further. Very well done. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I like this write a whole lot. You have penned a topic that is real for us all I think

[Lauriegirl]

The heart in this piece can be felt very vividly. Thank you for sharing with us here.