Stone heart

somewhere within
that stone heart
that was taken for granite,
lies a vein of gold
that is truly precious,
and no one has yet
been able to expose it
by digging deep enough
and uncovering
just what you need
and want in order to
make your life and
theirs more worthy.
But someday all that
glitters will be
yours and his,
and a small piece of it
will encircle your fingers
and be cherished
in the walls of two hearts

Reviews

[Anne Timmins]

wonderful images realized with depth and clarity. Well done!!

[Sometimes Blood]

wonderful rhythm and imagery and construction in this poem

[John Anderson]

Beautifully expressed and masterfully penned. Great wonderful poem

[Blake Fodor]

Well done, your writing is emotional.

[Aprille]

The language is simple yet full of emotion. :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

There is beauty, symbolism and a deep sense of emotion in this write.

[charlie]

Hey! A well written swirl of candy here. Sweet, and warm.

A very tidy little write, Artis. Feels like it weighs just right, too.

[yuki]

''but someday all that glitters will be yours and his,and a small piece of It will encircle your fingers ans be cherished in the wall of two hearts''
I really love this its make me think that two people are trying to connect on many levels.
very well done truly glad to read it :)

[Matching Socks]

Aww... :)
You wrote this beautifully.