The Longing [2005]

Pretty self-explanatory.

Wow, when we talk the words slip
I mumble when you say you wish to bite my lip
My heart will never let you go
If your life ends, mine will surely follow

You make my heart stop
But bring it back to life
Just in time for me to hear your sweet voice

You are my one and only
Never think differently
No matter what you do
I will never stop loving you

I am lost without you
Like a lost boy in the woods
I wander until you show me the way
I cannot comprehend your grace

Even if you hated me
I would not feel the same
I dream of you, and pray for your happiness
I would do anything for you...

...anything, I would never want to be with out you...

Author's Note

Review if you Like, just posting some old work. I am not really that big into poems anymore. But either way any reviews would be appreciated.

Reviews

[Blackrose]

I Like this :) Its not as sad as all your others yet it still proves to be deep :) (u had a typor in one of u others btw, I was gonn mention it for u but I saw this powem and got sidetracked, its just a too that should be to though) but I like your poetry, you don't completely rely on the imagry which I think is nice. You should start writing poems again though! Either that or post something else :P but eyah all was good and the only part I thought might have been even somewhat rocky was the fourth stanza. but good job, keep writing!