Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Arthur Aadams
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walking the path of depression

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© 2015 Arthur Aadams


Author's Note

Arthur Aadams
Note the use of alliteration, also, when you're in a very long tunnel you can't see the end, only after walking a couple of minutes you see a really small light dot. I got the inspiration while hiking in the Ardennes with my class (we walked through a tunnel like this, scary stuff)

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The alliteration carried this already beautiful and thought provoking piece! Nicely put Arthur. This was one of my favorite reads yet!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arthur Aadams

9 Years Ago

Thank you, means alot to me :)
Yes yes, you are indeed very like me i see, your choice of words and the way that you put them together almost creates a very unnerving yet content image.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Arthur Aadams

9 Years Ago

Thanks pix :)
a thouhgt provoking piece and a very fitting title

Posted 9 Years Ago


Arthur Aadams

9 Years Ago

Many thanks :)
The alliteration really made an impact on the poem and I really enjoyed reading it. It reminded me of a scary story i once heard.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Arthur Aadams

9 Years Ago

Thank you, ella
Loved the poem and its alliteration. Truly an interesting read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Arthur Aadams

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on July 12, 2015
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Tags: #depressoin, #depressive, #poem

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Arthur Aadams
Arthur Aadams

Bruges, Belgium



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worldview: agnostic, nihilistic, buddhistic. interests: drama, love, tragedy, philosphy. hobbies: guitar, singing, drawing, writing (poems, songtexts, philosphical columns, short stories) Eng.. more..

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