She Whispers With The Wind

I have no idea where this came from... lol

She Whispers With The Wind

 

The deep of the sea holds many wonders
a gradual departure of silence
I've been walking alone upon its shores.
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Up out of her depths, the faint orange ball
of fire rises high, that of our rising sun,
warmth that will soon embrace my soul.
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A survivor of many shipwrecks,
how many more come to rest
within her bed.
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My heart holds hands with the dead
hearing voices whisper these words I write
no longer held down by rusting sea brine metal.
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Map of stars
landscape the darkness of all nights
If I close my eyes I will feel her presence.
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There's a story to be told
how, and just when, I don't know
she whispers with the wind, not yet.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Truly beautiful
I love the sea
A fantastic write

[.]

like Cherrie the title grabbed me and pulled me in and where ever it came from, glad you channelled it through your pen.

[Cherrie]

the title captured my attention but the poem captured my imagination.

[Sara]

this is a beautiful write... you make me think not only of the mystery of the sea, but of the sirens of myth as well -- how mysterious and alluring, yet dangerous they are... lovely job here *fav*

[deeps]

This is such a lovely write here.
So wonderful and so well written.

[Wicahpi]

Seems I've survived a few 'shipwrecks' myself.
I like that part. This leaves questions to be answered.
Mysterious. Interesting write.