Let Me

Let me be addicted,

to your mind, your soul,

your lips, your skin.

Let me be enamoured

by your smile, your eyes,

your smell.

 

Let me linger in this fantasy a while,

this innocent attraction,

turned into a fascination.

an affection,

an addiction stronger than myself.

 

Let me long to hold you in my arms a while,

I crave your mouth,

your skin, your lips.

In my mind, I undress you many times

and many times I see

your exuberant eyes in front of me,

waiting,

longing,

craving to see me,

to lay beside me and to pierce my soul.

 

You are not here yet, but I feel you beside me,

holding,

kissing,

caressing my face.

My hands search for your arms,

I yearn to hold them against my breast.

And your hands are not here yet, but

I feel them all over me,

they sway and dance

throughout my body.

 

I am here in joy, in ecstasy,

let me be addicted,

let me feel your lips,

let me lay nude beside you,

and tell you my dreams.

 

Reviews

[Vatsayayana]

Gorgeous!
Your expression... your words. Everything is so powerful.
I could imagine lying there. Smiling. Waiting. The feel of my lovers lips.
This is so passionate and wrought with emotion. I felt every word through my fingertips, down to my toes.
Every touch, every breath, you've completely held my attention, stroking my imagination, causing it to run wild.
Your words are so powerful. What beauty, love passion!
You've encompassed such raw energy here. It blazes across the page.
Well done darling, this is by far and away now one of my favorites.
Thank you for sharing this. Brava!

[Nathan]

Sounds pretty impressive and warm. Your feelings are strong and it's all the warmth of your heart which turned the beats into the words. Lovely write which's filled with gratifying bites of love.

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding poem. Your description and emotion in every line. A pleasure to read.
Coyote

[Tomás Ó C..]

Thats my song to Angeleina Jolie...