Elevate My Soul

 

Elevate my soul,

Push me forward with the silence of your smile.

Through an empty vessel, the appearance of an unknown urge

Emerges from the depths of my soul.

 

Elevate my soul,

Let me see the inward sphere of your reality.

I hide no longer, I am there peeking, beyond the bushes

And the fields of grass, the lands of flowers and seas,

Hoping to unravel the outer shell of reality.

 

Elevate my soul, let my spirit free.

I push forward, my soul is pure embroidery,

Take hold of these links and threads

Traversing all the parts of my body.

 

All the forms of this picture - me, myself, I �"

Can only be seen on the reverse side.

Find a reason, and a purpose,

Because it is no longer empty, it is no longer confused.

 

It stands alone silently waiting for you to elevate the Soul.

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Elevate my soul, let my spirit free.

I push forward, my soul is pure embroidery,

Take hold of these links and threads

Traversing all the parts of my body.

The whole piece is beautifully written but those four lines were my personal favorites. This is eloquent, lush writing. It illuminates the emotion - causes joy to well up. It is resonant and has a spiritual tone that I find so appealing. Well done. And thanks for your recent review, and for stopping by my page.
This poem is a balm....

[Tomás Ó C..]

I like this poem...

[Izarah]

This made me cry. It's beautiful. Especially your soul being like embroidery. How poignant and sweet. Love you!

[nostal]

Nice.

[Victoria Emily]

This is beautiful. Very well written. It has a bit of a transcendental feel which I like. Nice job.

[Vatsayayana]

Oh my. I must remember to not read your work when I first awake, sleep still dripping from my eyes.
My breath caught, my hand fluttered to my throat, am I still breathing?
My pulse thready but still there.
I had to blink back the wetness behind my eyes.
My goodness your words are beautiful, stunning.
You're such a passionate woman. The way you think, write.
I love these expressions. To be able to see my way inside of you.
Your heart just glows my dear, positively radiates. :0)

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Very beautiful. I love the way your light and lively words seem to spell summer romance.

Luv,
Gabe