I can Change

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Seasons are changing, I am growing older

 I am growing sober, starting to realize

 You were everything, I used to hate

 You are everything, that I can't shake

 Please just give me a chance

 I can change, I can change

 Look into my eyes

 The vast and valiant ocean

 Singing songs, that I have spoken

 My words werent just a waste

 Starting to think

 That inside, failure without pride

 Failure without pride

 Baby just close your eyes

 Take my hand

 On a voyage to the sun

 We will sail

 Till the end

 Without you

 I meet my hell

 Seasons are changing

 The winds are blowing cold

 Will you give me another chance?

 I can change, I am changing

 Cause tonight

 I dont want to sleep alone

 Dont want to have to hear the silence

 of my broken home

 One last chance

 I can change, I can change

 I am changing

 For you

 For me

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked the repetition as well. It was really great and I loved the flow of the poem. Everyone changes eventually, but if its for someone you love then it can't always be that way. I know if you are physically hurting someone....you may try to change...but it always repeats over and over..You keep hurting them and then eventually they will leave you...and then you'll just be hurt more....but I do think this poem was excellent. No flaws or anything....
Thanks for sharing.

[Sofia N]

I love the repition, I love the style you wrote it, i love it..sometimes people realized that they should be a better person when they no longer have the person they love an di love how you portrayed that in this poem. Keep it up ;D

[Jenny Nelson]

Nice piece. Change. Happens. Sometimes people change together and grow together, other times the changes separate. Well done.

[MusicMartyrs]

it has simple meaning and was easy to follow.
change is ineviteble, it's how and why we change that
is ours to control. great job.

[Knoxxeh]

Nicly done once agian

[Bette]

well done