Noose Memories

a little song with a grunge/nirvana style set up.

I'm mediocre at what I do best,

Take me down to the river,

& drowned me at my best

Yeah, yeah.. Oh no..

There she goes

But does she know?

That it's all fun and games

YEAH! Well, I..

I forgot to say,

Everywhere I look,

Everything is so gay

Yeah, yeah, oh no

There she goes,

Hanging by a rope

OH!

Take me down to the river

And drowned me at my best

Take me down to the river

And drowned me at my best

I'm mediocre, I must admit

But I inhale all the fumes

Radiating on this disease,

If my brain must free; release

Memories, Memories,

Memories, memories,

memories, misery,

misery, misery,

memories!!!!!

Yeah, yeah, oh no

Who knew I'd be the one

To hand her the noose

There she goes,

Hanging by a rope

Yeah, yeah! Oh no!

Memories, Memories,

Memories, memories,

memories, misery,

misery, misery,

memories!!!!!

Reviews

[Hippy]

it is cool, i can't picture the music to it but can pick out a rhythm in some parts, i like the memories chant reminds me of an incubus chant in agoraphobia in which he chants for good like 8 times then says f**k off and keeps going with for good, i think misery should actually be like that.

[Mr. Hyde]

This is well written. It reminds me of Nick Cave's early stuff, for some reason. I like the way you juxtapose and contrast, and the imagery is lovely. You are obviously more concerned about conveying a general atmosphere and emotional state than telling a specific story or making a specific point, and I like that. I would love to hear how it interacts with the song's melody. It must be quite interesting.