Love's Mystery

Hearts afloat like smoke
dark as the candle flame
flickering with every gester of affection
romance
kisses grow
Sweet rose buds
soft moonlight
crystallized heart beats whispers in autumn air
promises fall like leaves
in the wind
for those three words
bond like bricks and mortar

Reviews

[RAOrourke]

I liked this poem, the words were filled with imagery and emotion. However, it was hard to read without any line breaks or punctuation. I think it would be great if you separated it by lines!

[Poetic_Kenection]

Thank you for the review I made some changes I hope it helps with the fluidity.

[RAOrourke]

Just that little change made a huge difference. Wonderful job!!

[Poetic_Kenection]

Thank you I will slowly be adding more if you want to keep checking back probably either tomorrow night or Wednesday.