The angel

An angel from heaven

Sent to save my poor worthless soul

She loved me in my brokenness

She healed my dark dark soul

 

I was lost in a sea of darkness

Tears of blood pouring from my wrists

Until she came and lit it up

She jerked the knife away

 

When I look at her

All my problems dissapear

My only thoughts of how lucky I am

Of how undeserving

 

My friend, my loved, my other half

She is the angel of my life

No other can compare

For when no one else cared she held me close

 

When I am with her I am complete

While in a way that is new and different

Wonderful and indiscribable is my Alice

The angel of my heart

 

Reviews

[krbritt]

just 30 seconds ago, i had yet to read a love poem that was raw and dark, and it was great, (i'll cross that off my bucket list)
r&r mine?

[Pakino]

nice poem. Simple and understandable. The feeling of being wanted and being respected is something everyone wishes for the poem expresses that desire and how the character of the poem tries to find that feeling. Nice!

[Elyse]

Beautiful, just lovely. You invoke images and responses built around passion, love, and dedication�I like it very much.

[~amanda~]

i like this poem because its dark, but theres an innocence to it too. i cant really explain what it is that i like, its everything, the voice, the despair, the happy ending... its really nice.
great work!

[Jackie Joker]

I have to say, this is the best pome I have ever read. I can tell how much this person means to you. I can feel your happiness through your words. I loved it. =]
~Jackie Joker

[Evil_Angel]

Aw i love this, i was just reading your bio and i'm assuming this is about your gf. :) I never really correct grammar lol and honestly for me it was too good to notice anything. I love the idea of a girl saving a guys life, and other way around. great job! :)

[Mintwhiskers]

u have a line saying how luck i am do you mean how lucky i am

[Mintwhiskers]

that is really good there is one thing i think u should change to make it flow better
instead of: she took the knife from my hand
how about: and jerked the knife away