Three healing words

Three healing words

A Poem by Arsenic Nemesis
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This is how I often try to make people I care about feel better...

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Sorry, I didn’t mean it,

Wounds may sting, if you clean it;

but nothing heals better,

nothing mends faster,

than a simple, three worded plaster;

Ha, ha, ha.

 

A laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay

© 2010 Arsenic Nemesis


Author's Note

Arsenic Nemesis
Now, this is no doubt going to be utterly terrible. However, poetry is NOT my forte, I just fancied giving it a go. Hope you all come out this alive~

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witty. very well written and the flow is great. you give us the unexpected but exactly what we all want to say: Ha, ha, ha. instead of the expected: I am sorry. i also love the proverb at the end: a laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay. much truth and humor in this short little rhyme. great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was cute. and it is very true too. I enjoyed reading it. thank you for sharing this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, thin skin is just that, and if you don't scratch it once in a while, it will wither and die.
And yes, Hahaha, is awesome.
In the world of factory jobs and moto-cross, we have a saying:
It don't hurt till the bone shows.
This isn't so terrible, but Holly was a hard act to follow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I do that too - make them laugh in order to make them feel better. I'm not the type to go "uh uh yeah yeah, i know! it's horrible" or "im so sorry!" or whatever. I'd rather just make them happy by laughing. I love this; it's definitely...awesome. (: And witty.

Posted 13 Years Ago


witty. very well written and the flow is great. you give us the unexpected but exactly what we all want to say: Ha, ha, ha. instead of the expected: I am sorry. i also love the proverb at the end: a laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay. much truth and humor in this short little rhyme. great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i really like this :D Laughter IS the best medicine :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Laughter is a wonderful thing... keeps you smiling :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this one, It is true though, Laughter is a great way to keep yourself from depression.. :] Keep Writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not your forte? Seriously that's a really good poem! Three worded plaster....really cool, I see that I don't have to spend any more money on plasters anymore, damn that cat...:D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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