witty. very well written and the flow is great. you give us the unexpected but exactly what we all want to say: Ha, ha, ha. instead of the expected: I am sorry. i also love the proverb at the end: a laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay. much truth and humor in this short little rhyme. great write.
Well, thin skin is just that, and if you don't scratch it once in a while, it will wither and die.
And yes, Hahaha, is awesome.
In the world of factory jobs and moto-cross, we have a saying:
It don't hurt till the bone shows.
This isn't so terrible, but Holly was a hard act to follow.
I do that too - make them laugh in order to make them feel better. I'm not the type to go "uh uh yeah yeah, i know! it's horrible" or "im so sorry!" or whatever. I'd rather just make them happy by laughing. I love this; it's definitely...awesome. (: And witty.
witty. very well written and the flow is great. you give us the unexpected but exactly what we all want to say: Ha, ha, ha. instead of the expected: I am sorry. i also love the proverb at the end: a laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay. much truth and humor in this short little rhyme. great write.
Not your forte? Seriously that's a really good poem! Three worded plaster....really cool, I see that I don't have to spend any more money on plasters anymore, damn that cat...:D