witty. very well written and the flow is great. you give us the unexpected but exactly what we all want to say: Ha, ha, ha. instead of the expected: I am sorry. i also love the proverb at the end: a laugh a day can help keep the scars at bay. much truth and humor in this short little rhyme. great write.
And they can help you live longer! Unless you die of- Okay! Not even going to go there! XD
Good job on the poem and it wasn't terrible. Everyone writes poetry differently XD
Very nice Written! Yes, the three words, hahaha, will probably the best healing words in the world! A Laugh a day, will totally heal ourslef! I LOVE the concept of this poem so much! You should let everyone read it! They will thanks you for giving them such a tips to heal!
i love the concept. a laugh a day! i laugh at everything to keep me from losing it...*cough*...the Joker!...anyway, it's always great to have a good laugh. when you're mad, or sad and most of all when you're happy it's important to stay laughing!
Such a truthful and amusing poem. Very well written, and I agree, a day always appears brighter when you smile and laugh. Nothing else can heal or help a hurting soul. Laughter is the cure. Great poem.