LOVE AROMA

My journey

love is the only reason for the existence of mankind

and you love me deeply and, i love you blind

No matter where i am, i seek your fragrance

In the roses, I seek you in the pleasure of an instance

Where are you, why i believe in you

If i can feel you, why i don't reach you

I know you are not far away

I will chase you and i am on my way

You will be the one who'll complete me

With your eyes, the new world i will see

It will be a life as the life itself begins

Through my misery and through my sins

 

Author's Note

think deeply then comment!

Reviews

[JackValor86]

well yeah, love is the reason for man kind even in a scientific sense as we're sexual reproducing organisms, but perhaps your saying that its the purpose of life and perhaps it is. Its a powerful theme that you see all throughout poetry stories and movies.
Then the rest of the poem seems like a yearning for love and it ends with a lament about the suffering we endure and will continue to endure throughout life.
Its a great poem especially for your first entry, I hope you continue to post new things just try to keep up the good quality, this ones great.

[Arsalan Tariq]

thanks for appreciation!

[Khazima Zainab]

I dont know what to say because I never gave reviews on writings but itz so real and beautiful like rainbows and a little gloomy !

[Arsalan Tariq]

is it really a little gloomy?thanks any ways!

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful. Life begins through misery and through sins. Very mature thought. It feels as though the words have come from depths of your heart after a great struggle. Beautifully written. I really liked it.

[Arsalan Tariq]

Thanks, I really appreciate that.

[Najam Us Saher]

It was my pleasure reading it.