Chapter 2 (Problems)

Lola feels that she needs alone time so she runs away from everyone when Slade's army takes her and threatens Ty and Oliver for something he wants like a trade...

Lola sighed and looked out the window watching Ty set up jumps for her and Dexter Lola's horse. Lola got dressed and ran out the door to talk to Ty "hey Ty, i feel like going to see my friends, you can hang out with Kalob here" Lola said and looked at Ty's face "sure, ill set this up for later though" Ty replied and smiled "no need, i can set it up tomorrow its fine Ty" Lola said as quick as possible and looked to the side. Ty nodded and got out his phone and called Kalob as Lola grabbed a horse only with a bridle and reins and ran off somewhere random. Lola got into town and seen Slade's army, she pulled the reins back as Dexter reared, they grabbed Lola and pulled her off of Dexter, they tried grabbing Dexter but he ran off before they could get to him. Slade had a knife to her throat while Ty and Oliver were there "we have to make a trade" Slade said and narrowed his eyes "wheres my horse!?" Lola had no clue what to do, Ty got angry "let her go whoever you are" Ty said and narrowed his eyes "only if i can trade" Slade replied and looked at Ty "trade what?" Oliver asked and held his bow aimed for Slade's head "Lola for....... Sara" Slade replied and smiled Lola grabbed the cure out of her pocket and stabbed Slade with it "next time it will be worse, jerk" Lola said and walked over to Ty "are you okay?" Oliver asked and put down his hood forgetting Ty was there "Oliver?" Ty said smiling "uh, how do i explain this" Oliver said and looked at Lola "you don't expect me to come up with an explination do you? and i need to find Dexter!" Lola said her eyes widened with fear "whats the worst that could happen to him?" Oliver asked and looked at Ty then Lola again "he could die by the other soliders or worse..." Lola replied and walked over to Ty "i already found him" Sara said holding Dexter's reins while hes rearing "hey its okay boy!" Lola whispered to Dexter "great now i have to train him to like people again, so much work!" Lola said and smiled at Dexter "its okay boy, you'll like humans soon" Lola whispered to her horse again "he seems to like you" Sara said and crossed her arms "he likes it when people talk to him, he knows how people feel he can sense it, if he smells fear he goes insane, sadness he wont listen to you and ya you get the point" Lola said and pet Dexter on the neck "so Ty, wanna meet me by the stables later while Lola works with Felicity's horse?" Oliver asked and looked at Ty "sure we can watch Lola, and drink a bottle of beer?" Ty replied and looked at Oliver "sure, but i dont get how you aren't mad at me for not telling you about my identity?" Oliver said and looked at Sara then Ty "well Lola told me so ya" Ty said and looked at Lola "really she did didn't she" Oliver said and looked at Lola. "What? its not like i can keep a secret from Ty that long!" Lola said and mounted Dexter looking at Oliver "maybe you cant keep things from Thea or your mother that long" Lola said and pet Dexter "i guess so...." Oliver said and walked away with Sara, Ty and Lola both walked back to the stable...

Author's Note

Characters In This Chapter: Oliver Queen, Lola Lance, Ty Gordon, Sara Lance, Slade Wilson, Slade's Army, Dexter

Reviews

[Barbara Tennyson]

The paragraph desperately needs work. Hit 'enter' after EVERY change of character. Put the speech, actions and thoughts of Lola, Oliver, Ty, Sara etc in SEPARATE paragraphs.
Check any hard copy story for examples. Good luck, this is a real mess.

[Arrow&Heartland]

thanks for the advice its appreciated very much!

[chris bevington]

I agree: it does need tidying up to make it easier to read, but on the up side, the plot is developing and I'm starting to get enticed into the story.

[Arrow&Heartland]

someone posted something for me, they said they loved my chapters and they think Lola and Oliver are gonna start dating, that may happen lol but its secret for now until chapter 10 is out

[The Walking Dead Fan]

i can agree with Barbara, it needs some edits!