Bait

Swinging, swinging...

All around...

My ears are ringing...

Stop the sound.

Head is tingling...

I am bound...

Why am I hanging...

Above the ground?

I hear banging...

Have I been found?

Steel clashing...

On the mound...

Water splashing...

Please don't drown.

Reviews

[Spirit_Raven101]

Wow this Poem gave me grouse bumps, its slightly dark and yet have some light in it. its really well done and pinned to perfection in my eyes.

[Arrinae]

Thank you, this peice is definately perfect forwhat I had been going for. That fact surprised me though. lol I'm my own worst critic.

Thank you for reviewing.

[Briana O'Connor]

Wowzers! This is amazing! There's a dark tale within and yet, it reads with a light sense of humor. Thank you for sharing. Very well penned.

[Arrinae]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

[Average person]

easy to follow flows well and has a nice scary twist :) nice. like it

[Arrinae]

Thanks! I'm glad you do!