Fairy tale...

Fairy tale...

A Poem by ArpitaChetan
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Dedicated to the person who inspires me to excel in life, who supports me and strengthens me whenever I fall weak..thanks for being there..I still remember the second time me met@Pune..

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Do you remember,the first time we met,
the 3rd of December,just after sunset.
I was in pink,or pomegranate was it?
I remember the whole scenario bit by bit.

You were in white,in polka dots,
there was crowd,market hustle and lots.
But you were constant,the only and one,
shun crowd,shun market hustle and lots shun.

The look on ur eyes,so innocently pure,
your love became my wound,disease and also the cure.

© 2017 ArpitaChetan


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Aww....that's like I peeped into someone's dear diary...I often get to read something like this...but this one is!!!!
Just a cute mistake I would point...in the description it might be we met instead me met?
But I guess in excitement of writing bout beloved you didn't notice!😊
Nice read😇

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Aww....that's like I peeped into someone's dear diary...I often get to read something like this...but this one is!!!!
Just a cute mistake I would point...in the description it might be we met instead me met?
But I guess in excitement of writing bout beloved you didn't notice!😊
Nice read😇

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Gee
Liked the last line best, some lines seemed as though they were put in just to get a rhyme.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ArpitaChetan

7 Years Ago

Thank u so much for the review..yes some lines were indeed put just to rhyme but tried my best to pr.. read more
Gee

7 Years Ago

Nae problem. Have a good day
ArpitaChetan

7 Years Ago

Same to u :)

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Added on October 15, 2017
Last Updated on October 15, 2017
Tags: #dedicated, #second_meet, #memory_lane, #love