Desirable Girls

Desirable Girls

A Poem by Arpeggi

Cute, sugar sweet
Pink phone and hog-tied lover
Dimples you unintentionally smother
Brother from another mother
My cubic zirconia dream

Hot, dewy-eyed
Sticky from condensation of conceit
Clinging to the pedestal
Insisting to hold on with tender feet
Well, they have you beat

Fine, currency kept
Calculation of projection
In a room alone, with no echo of protection
Guided by the extension of greedy hands
You left him

© 2011 Arpeggi


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Will do, thanks.
It has meaning, but obviously it is not clear to the reader, so that is something to improve upon.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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JMS
three cheers for trying, though maybe you should refine this a bit. seems a bit mucky. not to say that I am dazzled by your wordplay, but without meaning it's nothing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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