THE FIRST

THE FIRST

A Poem by Akash Pathak
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its a very short poem.

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like the lonely flower of morning ,
with a water drop on it.

like the kingfisher on a branch,
waiting for a fish to catch.

like the lonely bird in a rainy day,
sitting on a top of a pole.

what will happened if,
the flower get a butterfly,
the kingfisher got a fish,
the bird got its partner ?

when I meet you I felt the same.

© 2015 Akash Pathak


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A beautiful sentiment in falling in love for the first time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akash Pathak

9 Years Ago

thank u Mr.
I really apriciate ur review.

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Akash Pathak
Akash Pathak

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I'm now a student of microbiology, and I'm puzzled to know about the meaning of life! I love nature a lot and fell wandered about its beauty of work ..... more over I'm a good boy more..

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A Poem by Akash Pathak