Take Me Away...

                          Take Me Away

Take me away,

  In the open sky,

     where birds are FREE,

     where stars are FREE,

I wanna be like them

I wanna be like them,

             Please take me away .

Author's Note

be FREE

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

I share this longing to feel the freedom of the birds and the stars! Wonderful short clear poem about freedom and the desire we humans have to feel that soaring experience.

[Arooj Purra]

Thanks a lot for your review dear.I am glade that you liked this poem.#FREE

[H.L. Cerveise]

The flow and ease of reading in this poem are great. Freedom is a topic that is always at the forefront in everyone's mind I feel. I like comparing it to not just the birds but the very stars themselves. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you for sharing.

Well done.

[Arooj Purra]

Thanks a lot..

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very good poem. Being free is the most a person wants to have. Good job :)

[Arooj Purra]

yes i agree with you .Thanks a lot for your review.#FREE

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome #FREE

[DRAGO]

nice job. Fun read
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[Arooj Purra]

Thanks a lot friend.

[Akshita]

It is such a nice poem! I really enjoyed it.

[Arooj Purra]

So nice of you,Thanks a lot.

[Nwang]

Original to the core. I like your rendition of freedom, straight and simple.#FREE

[Arooj Purra]

Thanks a lot dear...yup #FREE

[wordman]

just gotta be free ! like my poem got to be free

[Arooj Purra]

yes #FREE...

[Shabeeh Haider]

A longing to be in the open. We all want to be truly free. nicely expressed.

[Arooj Purra]

thank you so much dear .

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. The value of freedom is under-rated. The days when we are free to wander and discover. Greatest days of our life. I liked the hope and the wish in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Arooj Purra]

Thanks a lot Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Nice words to express the feelings for freedom...

[Arooj Purra]

thank u dear..

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most welcome friend :)