SleepWalker

A hope to ignite the concept of deliberate living

'Every cycle is the same
nothing new, nothing gained
anything dictated is concurred
any occurrence is barely assimilated
a life without aspirations or inspirations
yet you claim to be alive
you claim to be awake
your postulation on existence is nothing but delusion
why are you here
you can't consign an affirmable answer
well neither can anyone else
time may tell, if it cares to
no words can truly clarify existence
though your nature does not permit you to enquire
the wordless proclamation of your being is as definitive as a sleepwalker'

Author's Note

Would appreciate contradictions, criticisms and additions to the concept.

Reviews

[Windy Gale]

Insightful, intelligent, great vocabulary. You say a lot. I like the style of little punctuation and capitalization, as if it is all one thought, and one line cannot exist without the other.

[Quill]

glad you think of it that way