Write your heart out!

Love yourself. Life is short before you run for someone always remember are you capable of running? What if you don't get the right one? Don't let love decide what your decision is.

Write your heart out!

Life is like a star there is a time when you shine brightly, there is a time when you get black. The ups and downs of life give you a lesson yet you don't want to learn.

Life is beautiful in its way similarly life give you a hard time. The ones who believe that they have full control or the whole soul of one belongs to them are at the wrong end. One can only have his/her soul. The second belongs to the one who accompanies them in their journey.

Life is wonderful if you tend to make it wonderful. Life can get worst if you make it worst. Today the topic on which I tend to talk is LIFE.

Most importantly, as usual, I would talk only about myself.

I never enjoyed the blessed life I have been given. Even me who has everything in his life is seeking for something else. It was easy for me to say to myself that I am happy alone. Yet none would understand the being alone might bring pain aswell. I seek to get some space into someone's heart. Yesterday I was talking to a friend who said that I keep on degrading me on a stance that I am not worth it. I lied to her that I do it for the reason to expect something better but the bitter truth is I don't expect anything.

Lies have never been part of me but sometimes I believe that if I keep on telling me people I remain sad or that I feel alone they might think I am being desperate for something.

It is a life experience you face everything in it.

I'm tired I'm tired I'm tired of being alone. Having no one on the side. Having no one to whom you could tell everything and burst yourself out infront of them. I want to seek refuge in one's heart. Don’t take me to such a heart which doesn't have any importance for me nor to such a heart who does for sympathy.

Allow me to find one heart which beats for me. That one heart who start to pump fast as soon as my name is taken infront of them. Allow me to have such a person who has this heart. Allow me to go old with such a person. Allow me the best time of my life.

I don't rush to find the wrong one and regret it later on. Yet the one who does has feeling for me I have no concerns with what have one done in the past. Nor I want her to recall it nor I want her to tell me everything before it. Yes, I do want that when the time comes and she allows me to be the owner that heart one should try not to make such a mistake which would lead to distrust.

Today, I believe nothing is more painful than knowing the one whom you trusted everything broke the trust. A person like me would always have blind trust in one. Yet that blind trust should not be broken because I believe if the trust is again broken there won't a chance of saving this guy once again.

What a beautiful quote I just read it say " We all are stars, wishing for someone to adore the way we are."

I wonder whether the star of mine will shine again or it had all blacked out. The hope is still alive but just like the spark is required to lit the fire. Currently, no spark can be found anywhere.

Bring the best out of your Rana and you will hope and the spark. It's easy to say that when the time will come you would get what you actually but something when the time comes you might have no interest in the same thing. It's just like constant pain leads you to be strong and later on, you don't feel the pain. I fear that my pain would be over soon but I would then lose the basic interest of life.

Like it is said that the kids should be allowed to play have fun in life and if they are not allowed to do so then? Then, the thing always remains with the person and the person can not overcome it and along with that, the person doesn’t have any kind of childhood so one doesn't have the feelings ever.

I don't know why am I writing so much today. Normally, I don't write and express myself. But maybe you are only one to whom I can tell even I fall in love. I can tell and you won't judge me. I'm not a sick person nor I am desperate for anyone yet I require someone in my life. I have kept my door open so that people may enter and might be a chance that the right one might enter aswell.

 

Rana Muhammad Ammad Ul Haq (Madiee)

Email: [email protected]

Telephone: [phone]

Author's Note

To understand the emotions and reason to write this is to read it in silence when you are alone. You will feel I am no talking about myself but it is your story.

Reviews

[JayG]

I’m primarily in fiction, so… But that being said, there are some things that jumped out at me. And you did request I take a look, so… Add this to your views on life: Be careful what you wish for. Your wish just might be granted.

• You express views of your own and then proceed as if they applied, universally. When you say, “The ups and downs of life give you a lesson yet you don't want to learn.” It’s so nonspecific that the reader laks context to make it meaningful. What’s an “up?” Getting up and feeling okay, or winning the lottery? What’s a down? Cancer? Spilling coffee on the carpet? You can’t draw specific conclusions from generalized data. And the reader can’t get your intended meaning without them.

• Life is wonderful if you tend to make it wonderful. Life can get worst if you make it worst.

You’re stating the obvious. That is a killer because it’s like saying, “Mashed potatoes have no bones.” Is it true? Sure. Can we to draw conclusions based on the statement? No. Tell the reader something obvious, and unrelated to what‘s being discussed and you lose them.

• Most importantly, as usual,

Give me one reason a given reader wants to know about you? You’re a stranger they can neither see nor hear. They know nothing meaningful about you that would make your views more interesting then someone chosen at random on the street. So for all practical purposes, you’re the person who stops a passer-by and says, “Let me tell you my views on life.”

If it were to happen to you today…were it to be me, someone you wouldn’t recognize saying, “You don’t know anything about me, but I want to talk about myself.” Would you say, “Absolutely.”? Or would you edge away me and mumble something about having an appointment you can’t miss?

Unless your response is to be glad to listen to anyone who wants to talk about themself you can’t expect a reader to read on when you do the same. FIRST you need to make the reader WANT to know more. You absolutely must interest them Your first line can’t be a platitude. You have to, at the least, make reading about you more interesting than what the reader would be doing instead of reading. Who would read if doing something else was more interesting?

Not good news, but remember, readers are volunteers, not conscripts. If you don’t give them reason to WANT to turn pages they stop doing it. And this is true on every page.

And finally, punctuation matters a great deal. Its purpose is to tell the reader HOW you want the line to be read. Remember, the reader can’t hear how you read it, and doesn’t know whow you want them to read it without help in the form of carefully chosen phrases, and punctuation that guides them as they read. Look at what happens without punctuation: The sentence below, while convoluted and awkward, makes perfect sense when punctuated. But without punctuation?
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James, while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
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Make sense to you? How about punctuated as:

James, while John had had “had,” had had “had had”; “had had” had had a better effect on the teacher.

Or better yet:

James, (while John had written “had,”) had written “had had”; “had had” had left a better effect on the teacher.

Sorry my news wasn’t better.

It might make sense to check out some of the articles in my writing blog. It’s designed for the hopeful fiction writer, but a lot of it applies to this kind of thing, as well.

Jay Greenstein
https://jaygreenstein.wordpress.com/category/the-craft-of-writing/the-grumpy-old-writing-coach/

[Rana Ammad]

I understood each point which you have raised. I would look forward to improve all these things. Yes, the review which you gave helped me alot.
I just hope that I improve with the passage of time. Thank you for you time! :)

[Kerra]

I had no problems reading this, I thought it was sweet. Nicely done

[Robert Trakofler]

You would be amazed how much one can cover in a short passage:) Love and life are fine subjects with which to write! What this writing you have given me example of, is more of a thought flow than anything else. Thought flows are tricky because the writer has a tendency to think what he is conveying has a universal understanding... because they may remark upon something that is locked in his/her comprehension forgetting that the reader does not share your mind or given understanding. It is easy to slip into this when in the throws of expression. I see much of what you are trying to say and recognize it in an empathy to it. However the conveyance is fractured and incomplete and not doing justice to your sincere expressions... I will respond further through your email you had sent me earlier for some ideas and suggestions if you are interested:)

[Rana Ammad]

I will try to follow your guidelines which you have provided and will improve in the future.

[Jennifer]

This is really sweet. I have found that some of the best writing is not written well. There is a good book called Turkish Wedding by Judith Reynolds Brown that is really really good, but not written very well.

[Rana Ammad]

Really appreciate your kind words. Look forward to improve more.

[John the Baptist]

I had no trouble in understanding the point you are making in this one, Ammad. What you need is a little polishing of your style so you can communicate your thoughts more clearly. Let's start with what is called run-on sentences. When a sentence has expressed its meaning completely, then it needs a period to separate it from the next sentence. For example, in the beginning of this essay, you state "Life is like a star," but instead of ending it after "star" with a period, you go on into the next sentence, the first word of which should have begun with a capital letter. For practice, look through your essay for any other run-on sentences and end them in the proper places with periods. Keep writing.

[Rana Ammad]

Thank you very much! I understood what you actually meant by that. I will work hard on it from now on and try to overcome these issues.