Mad Love

Crashing beauty
Breaking smoothly
The vicious heart that can't be won
Perfect haunting
Pure mad wanting
The lover's shout kept from the tongue
Timid pureness
Shifting sureness
An open wound within my chest
Shaming treason
Blaming reason
An ugly verse for my last breaths

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

a very beautiful poem. Its quickly become one of my favorites I look forward to reading more.

[Simon Welsh]

Hmm, different. I like; particularly the last line.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I love the rhyme scheme! It fits perfectly with what your saying!

[Mak(ayla:)]

Beautiful! You should totally write more(: