Her words

Her words

A Poem by Hunter Nolan
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Find the meaning.

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What's the problem, love?

Don't you cry

I'll make it better

But you said goodbye

Truth be told

With a heart of gold

I said I'd wait, but it's too late

 

You tear me down when I think of you

 

Where the hell did I go wrong?

I worshipped you for much too long

Now you say with a solid heart

That we've grown much too apart

 

You're never there when I speak to you

 

The fury and madness

The sorrow and sadness

It makes this gun look a little friendly

You've made two  words seem deadly

 

The love you gave me, false and untrue

 

All i want is to be in your arms

Free from pain and free from harm

I miss my head on your shoulders

Since you left it's so much colder

 

You shatter me with the words you threw

 

What's the problem, love?

Don't you cry

I'll make it better

But you said goodbye

Like a record you play those words

Thrown away without a first second or third

 

Stand by the wooden bed

Hope you're happy cause now I'm dead

Choked by the rope of your words

Threw my life away without a first second or third

Cause I'd rather watch you cry, and see how it feels

When I say goodbye

© 2008 Hunter Nolan


Author's Note

Hunter Nolan
Yeah, That's her

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amazing poem. I really liked the story it told, though it was sad, its safe to say Ive been there once or twice. Your poem flowed great and the rhyming was really on. :-D Good write




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Hunter Nolan
Hunter Nolan

Fort Mill, SC



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I write about mostly my past and present. My writing is sometimes violent as it expresses my anger, depressing because it reflects my sadness. I get as creative as possible. My writing usually goes.. more..

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