Images

They're
Just

Things

I hear
I see

Just
Images

Just
Situations.

No
It's not just,

They were
Real people

Images

Reflected

On raindrops

Falling in my eyes.

Reviews

[theludus]

Are you aware of a certain pedestrian poet. This is not what he would say. I would suggest dry eyes, I suggest this because lubrication is a necessity.

That is all.

They were just things, if you made the tense consistent throughout then that would strengthen this.

They were also lends itself toward nostalgia and gives the thoughts weight because it indicates that these people have, are, exist within the soul. Eyes are the windows to soul. Can a person function well with dry eyes? symbolically dry eyes are not the beans, raindrops falling on dry are are mana from heaven. The relationship strengthens the verse imo.

[mattavelli]

Cool poem. :)
Take care.