Cross Roads

Standing at the crossroads

Heart filled with pain

Tears streaming down

Like falling rain

 

Should I go to the left?

Or to the right

One leads to dark

The other leads to the light

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very well written.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Lovely poem, and true direction.

[Speechless Shadow]

Wow that's really interesting. Although you made it short, you put a lot of feeling into two stanzas. Keep up the good work!

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

not much written yet lots said.

[alesuriko]

Good beginning. Short and concise with a typical message displayed in a rhythmic way. It as a lot of potential, I've give you that. But it doesn't feel complete, even if it is meant to drop off like that to emphasis the uncertainty in deciding which path to take. Or rather, it doesn't feel rich enough or expressive enough to end so abruptly is what I'm trying to say. Still though, lots of potential and good rhyme.

[NeverSurrender]

It's a short poem, very mysterious. The rhyme is also well done, it connects to the poem but is not obvious or annoying. Well done.

love,

N.S.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great piece flows beautify,Well done.

[The High Poet]

liked it short and sweet right to the point. Keep it up!

[Daniel Gardner]

Great poem to get the reader thinking. Makes you feel that it is written for you and no one else. Every has to make this choice someday.