Read. Comments not needed. I simply ask you to think. Think about what the words mean. And then, next time you see the child. Ask them what they think.
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This is beautiful. Wow. I hate it when an adult (i.e, my dad, or maybe a teacher) tells me that I don't understand the way of the world. I understand better than I wish I did, to be honest. Sometimes I wish I could just be oblivious like so of the other mindless drones out culture has created. And then, like you do, I look at the pain all around me, and it's so appaling. But of course, then I'm told, just worry about being a kid.
Also being a teen, I understand what you're saying.
This is beautiful, people always say that children can't do anything in a time of help because we can't give money... but sometimes little things like sending them food or water is better than sending money. You have proven a very excellent point that proves if anybody YOUNG or OLD want to help than they should. This was amazing, and very well done.
Yeah, I agree very much. I really like the different thoughts and they way you showed how you felt. Like the examples...They're really great.
I can really feel the feeling through your writing.
It helped me feel it in myself!
great sentiments here! and so you should abscond from what is expected and free yourself from the autonomous fate that is predestined for so many of us, for to break that is to be yourself, and by posting on here, you're on your way to doing so!
This is beautiful. Wow. I hate it when an adult (i.e, my dad, or maybe a teacher) tells me that I don't understand the way of the world. I understand better than I wish I did, to be honest. Sometimes I wish I could just be oblivious like so of the other mindless drones out culture has created. And then, like you do, I look at the pain all around me, and it's so appaling. But of course, then I'm told, just worry about being a kid.
Also being a teen, I understand what you're saying.
I'm a young teen very inspired by great authors, musicians and artists of any and all kinds.
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