Hollow

Hollow

A Poem by Arius
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What happens when the one person you ever depended on leaves?

"

I'm stranded

Alone

You're here no longer

You gave me courage

You made me happy

You made me forget

Forget that I hated myself

Forget the feelings of worthlessness

You made me feel necessary

Wanted...

I should have known

You never wanted to stay

I don't blame you

But still...

The pain is unbearable

Is it possible to stand again?

To smile...

To laugh...

Without you?

© 2011 Arius


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You gave me courage
You made me happy
You made me forget
Forget that I hated myself

I know these feelings here,
I like how you turned it around at the end to hopeful.
This is wonderful

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 7, 2010
Last Updated on May 9, 2011
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