lonelines

just that loneliness

Loneliness

I'm feeling lonely
Your arms don't reach me
Calamity accompanies me
Dust accumulates on my eyes
Air is thicker and my skin dries
Cuz I'm feeling lonely
I can't help what I feel

The weight of an eyelash
The skin of a tear
The loneliness comes
In simplest form, it hides
In the other side of my eyelid
Cuz I'm feeling lonely

I can't help to want you
My wings are broken
And among other things
I can't write you about
My loneliness

Oh Loneliness!!!

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Love every word that is mix with the loneliness .. the rhythm got me on the 1st phrase... and I read it 4 times...not one typo ... perfection..

[MagiCrystal]

This piece, owns passion.. Love.. missing..longing, pain, and tears....A lost love.. so sad..i feel the pain..
I love this kind words.. I do
Magic

[Porcelain]

It flows proper well:]
I love the constant reference to lonliness and there are some rather poignant points made about the emotion
Definitely my kind of poem
Acessss