A Deidara Love Story, Love, Pain, and Truth (chapter 5)A Chapter by MeaganThis is a story about a girl named Arisa that falls in love with Deidara but both of them face troubles durning it. This is the first story I wrote so please comment and rate. The other chapters will becoming shortly so read to find what happens next.
The Feelings For You Ok I just want to thank everyone for reading this far into my story. It took me a long time to do this and I appreciate that you will rate and review and comment my story. I’ll leave this chapter for you to figure out when you read it… Arisa stayed in her room the whole day. She didn’t want to show her face to anyone out of her room. She was bored but she didn’t want to take the risk of getting made fun of or embarrassed. She sat there for a few minutes until a knock at the door made her get up. She stood right by the door. Who is it? Arisa asked. Its Konan, can you let me in. A female voice answered. Arisa thought for a while who Konan could be and if she knew her. She didn’t recognize her by the name so the possibility of not knowing her was high. She unlocked the door and stepped back. Can I come in? Was Konan’s reply Ya, um sure, what do you want? Arisa said as she sat back on her bed. First of all I wanted to welcome you to the clan and secondly, what was going on between you and Deidara this morning? Konan asked. Arisa blushed and smiled when Konan mentioned Deidara’s name. Oh, um, can we please not talk about this, I’m not in the mood, and it’s too embarrassing anyways. Arisa said making excuses. C’mon think of me as your friend….please? Just tell me what happened… Konan said pleading. I’ll just say I think I love Deidara, that’s all I’m telling you. Arisa said sounding stern. WHAT! Seriously, Arisa I thought you hated him, he told everyone that you did. Konan said. I know, but I think I’m starting to like him. Arisa replied. Konan sat on Arisa’s bed now also where Arisa was sitting. Did you have sex? Konan asked biting her lower lip. Huh? What! No, not exactly. Arisa said puzzled. Well, you guys kiss? Konan asked. What? I don’t know what I’m telling you this, I don’t really know you. Arisa said changing the conversation. Like I said before, think of me as your friend, I mean it, you’re my friend, and if you are worried that I’m going to tell everybody, I swear, I won’t. Konan said seriously. Ok yes, we did. Arisa said. Wow, I’d watch your back, you have only been here for a day and a half and you’re already loving someone. If I were you I would avoid Deidara for a few days. Konan said. Really? You think I should, I don’t want to piss off anyone, like you said I’ve only been here for a day and a half. I think your right, and if you see him tell him it’s nothing personal. Arisa said. Ok I will. Konan said. Promise? Arisa asked. Konan made a face showing she promised. Ya I promise. Konan said anyways. Hey do you want to come and walk around for awhile? Konan asked. Mmm, no not really, I just want to stay in here for today. Arisa replied. Ok, see you later. Konan replied. As she stepped off Arisa’s bed. Arisa and Konan hugged and then Konan left, the door closed behind her with a quiet bang. She could hear people outside the hall. Bye….Whispered Arisa. Then she got up and locked her bedroom door and laid back down on her bed staring at the ceiling, wondering if she should have said all that stuff. She just lay on her bed and thought the whole day. To Be Continued… Ok so that was the end of chapter 5. I hope you liked it. Post what you think in either comment or review and rate how good it was. The next chapter is coming up next so be prepared. And I just want to thank everybody for reading onto the part, keep reading, and have fun! © 2009 Meagan |
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