Soft and ever so gentle...

Soft and ever so gentle...

A Poem by Aries

Soft and ever so gentle...
Are your hands touching my delicate face,
I want to wrap myself in the arms
Of your embrace.

Soft and ever so gentle...
Is the flicker of a candles' glow
As we make love, listening to
Our song playing on the raido.

Soft and ever so gentle...
Is the tenderness of your touch
Baby, I love you oh, so much.

Soft and ever so gentle...
Is the sound of my cry,
Because I never want you to tell
Me that one sad, last good-bye.

© 2010 Aries


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it flows with a gentle delicacy, wonderful.
I loved it.
So full of gentle passion.
Great work =]
~Wandering Soul~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My kind of poem. Flows so well, speaks to my heart. YOu wrote it with each first stanza repeating itself, which gave the poem rhythm, like a song. I thought it was great. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and tender... a heart that speaks such words of constant love and affection. Your words inspire and lift!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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