Love Lost

Just Something I came up with

She sit alone waiting

In the darkness

that surrounds her

longing

the love she once knew

lost


forgotten and lonely

she waits for him

knowing

he will never pass

this way

again

Author's Note

I am still suffering writers block in a big way..This is just something that I came up with, as the result of an exercise a friend told me to do, this is supposed to help with writers block...I am open to constructive criticism and tips to overcome this block!

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

that makes me feel so sad :(
but its a great poem

[Ken]

I'm not big on poetry , however, this is great.. How true. People pass through our lives. At one moment ,they are our world. Then, in an instant, they are gone. It never ceases to amaze me. A great poem...

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Nice, it floats, it is easy to read. I think it's good to show us what you wrote to get out of writers block, because then it shows us not everyone has to write a certain form or way, but we can just "write." no matter what state of mind we are in. but you did a good job here.

[Imperfection]

This is a wonderful write. Gives the impression that you're past Writer's Block.
Short sentences, few words and yet you convey a lot. There's a whole story in between these lines.

I can identify with these feelings. I'm still waiting...
In vain.

[Arianna]

This is good, especially for someone who is suffering writers block. It seems to be getting better. Keep up the exercises, they are working. I like the emotion this displays, very open and honest. A good write.

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This is good. It has a lot of emotions that seem to come from deep within you. I love the structure and the flow. good write!