A Tribute to Mom

A Tribute to Mom

A Poem by Aries

Mother



All alone you cared for me
By my side you always stood
You were there for me no matter what
Like only a Mother Would

The times we shared together
are very special to me
You were one of those Mothers
I wish I could be

Always understanding me
when I didn't understand myself
always wanting the best for me
even when I wanted less


I miss You more as time goes by
My life has an empty space
Only a Mother like you
Could fill this empty place

This empty feeling in my heart
will never again be filled
This wound  was created
when you went away
And it will never be healed

I will never say goodbye to you
you will always live in my heart
I know I will see you again someday
Never again to be apart

Rest In Peace Mom,
I Love You......

© 2008 Aries


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Really very good - beautiful and endearingly heartfelt.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully Expressive

Posted 16 Years Ago


Written with raw emotion and a lot of love. I felt not only the pain in your words
but the pride you felt being loved by such a wonderful woman. Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW! I can really feel the emotion in this poem....This is a very nice tribute..

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow!!! This is so good! So sad!! I could feel your pain. I lost my father recently and I can relate. I don't know what I would do if I lost my mother. Very good poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful tribute this is.

always wanting the best for me
even when I wanted less

I like your expressions. They say so much without making it appear like too much. This kind of writing touches the soul.



Posted 16 Years Ago


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Posted 16 Years Ago


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WOW
that was so wonderful , you made me cry,i feel your pain,and yes you will be together again,we will all meet our loved one's again some day soon i belive it will be. thats great writting sweety,love you with all my heart,hugs.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the honesty in your writings. My grandmother died in october, and if my mother had to express herself to her it would sound a lot like this. I'm sorry for your loss, this is a very touching piece. Thank you.



Posted 16 Years Ago


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I am a 44 yr old Proud Mother and Grandmother. I have two daughters and three grandsons.... I lost my Mom on June 10, 2004...My life hasn't been the same...I miss her Everyday.... I suffer from bipo.. more..

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