Sci-Fi

Sci-Fi

A Poem by Ariel Olivia
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Sci-Fi-like kind of writing, I don't know what inspired it.

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There are spider legs on the walls
The lights are dem
& the air is dull
there's one window
& there's a palm tree & a small island
This place holds enlightenment
Unknown civilization
The tiles are peeling off the floor
& There's a hole blocking my escape
In front of the door
No escaping from this surreal world
Of uncertainty.

© 2012 Ariel Olivia


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Ohh, i like this. It flows nicely and has an element of eeriness. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ariel Olivia

12 Years Ago

Such a wonderful compliment, thank you so much!
It's short, yet it has depth in it. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ariel Olivia

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)

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Added on May 17, 2012
Last Updated on May 29, 2012