Given Up

Circa 2004. I felt silly that I even kept this, it's not very good at all, but it might inspire someone or something.

Something, was something screaming?
Something... sad... something crazy.
Something of my life.
Something.
Some-thing.
Some=numerous Thing=object
Numerous-Objects...
Umm...
Thinking in terms of advice
From a 75 yr old woman on main street drunk off wine...
Lofts...
Emptiness...
Smells, like... summertime.
Cooking out, in the middle of the night.
Hearing things beyond the tree line.
Something.
Unknown.
Just something.
$8.
Permission from your one and only.
I dont want this come and get me.
Acoustic sounds listening closely.
Oh... I... give... up.           

Reviews

[EternityWolf101]

don't think any of your poetry is bad. Poetry is a hard to define type of writing that really doesn't have a body or form, so its not like anybody can say its bad. It depends on the writer. Nice writing.

[Ariel Olivia]

Thank you so much for the comment, I needed to hear that :)