Morning-time Nervous Breakdown

I was waking up and it rattled around in my head for a few minutes and then I wokeup and started to write it all down. It's not perfect, but I thought it was a little inspiring, I love morning-time.

the nocturnal beings are going to sleep
the sun is rising in the east
beautiful colors burst through trees
mysterious shapes, morning-time smells
colors set themselves up
on leaves, a setting of imagination
the world is coming alive
where the working man strives
their heads barely above water
floating down the stream of life
tomorrow might be better
a dew sets on the ground
discovery of a place unknown
it's a tired state of mind
things to be done, things to be said
listen closely to all the sounds
but watch out...
for this world might break you down.

Reviews

[EternityWolf101]

Very respectable, dear Ariel. I like how it just fits into what is defined, well... to me it is, a normal life. I like it.

[Ariel Olivia]

Thank you so much for the wonderful review :)

[Cathy Wattam]

Very true words. Nice expressive poem. Please note - "the nocturnal beings are going to sleep". No apostrophe needed here! Otherwise, thanks, I enjoyed reading it.

[Ariel Olivia]

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for catching that mistake! I had read over it many times and didn't even catch it, thank you again!