Structure

Everything that you hold so dearly may not be worth anything at all if you don't have structure.

Something you value so much turns out to have no worth at all.

The saying goes "Once it's broken don't try to fix it" and thats exactly what this is
worthless and un fixable.

You seem to flee everytime they make you feel less valuable but steady you try to put the broken pieces back together and in the end you still have nothing.

It's like having a beautiful glass bowl and it drops and shatters to pieces.

You try to gather the pieces together hoping that it holds it's structure, but you soon find out in the end its just a cracked bowl with no value.

-ArielB.-

Author's Note

ignore some of thr run ons :) just getting back to it but tell me how you feel about the poem and did it take you to a place where you have experienced something of the sort or if you understood :)

Reviews

[Rosewood...]

I really like this poem!

[Dunlack]

I like it...I almost feel as if you are giving that "no matter how hard you try" life smacks you in the face impression.

[ShameemAkhtar]

great perspective...

but it's interesting to think that gluing back together broken pieces of glasses (or even other material) is equally considered a kind of art...

:)

[ArielB.]

thank you :)

[Luke Ritta]

good poem......keep up the good work!