Warning: Questioning Sarcasm May Cause You To Cease Existence

Just a blur of my memories through an orb of jet black confusion put into song. Kinda makes you wanna punch a mirror just because you want to destroy your fragile reflection. Or maybe that's just me.

   Lock me in a safe. Make me your precious items. Set my heart on fire. Make me come to life. Forgetting all the things I said when my life meant nothing. (But everything to you)

   When I look up from the blackness of this land, all I hope to see is you standing, holding out a golden hand. I am reaching out to heal my shattered mind. Forgive my weakness, but Im falling right through time.

   Grab ahold of my heart, keep it in your great possession (Never let go). Release my thoughts, throw them overboard. Watch them drown in the sea (Make me feel clean).

   When I look up from the blackness of this land, all I hope to see is you standing, holding out a golden hand. I am reaching out to heal my shattered mind. Forgive my weakness, but Im falling right through time.

   Whole life breaking into pieces, like this jaded mirror when shattered through my anger. Desperation is only in my mind like a self-inflicted numbness saying I need you behind me. (Whole life breaking into pieces, like this jaded mirror when shattered through my anger).

   When I look up from the blackness of this land, all I hope to see is you standing, holding out a golden hand. I am reaching out to heal my shattered mind. Forgive my weakness, but Im falling right through time.

   (Now my life is yours)

 

  

Author's Note

Just some song I made
There are a lot....
What do you think?

Reviews

[Autumn's Offspring]

I like the internal rhyme here; it's subtle and nicely done.
"Set my heart on fire" is a beautiful line. Very vivid, very emotional.

[M Slaughter]

That was good. I do hope that they reach their golden hand out to you. :]