Days Come Days Go...

Days Come Days Go...

A Poem by Shadow
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Something I found in the back of my maths jotter from a time when I was REALLY bored.

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Another day ends,

Another begins

Another chance to say these words

To make my life worth his

Life is swift...

 

 

Death is eternal.

Who are we to

Judge that?

Everything must die

In the end of time, in

The end

Days come,

Days go

Like the swallows migrating

Days come

Days go...

© 2008 Shadow


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You are correct in this poem.
"Days come,
Days go"
Death will come one day. Better not to worry. Do all the dancing, loving and celebrating. Death has a calendar he followed with great detail.
I like this poem. It is outstanding.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


A real good piece, mad me think of another poem, really good. I enjoyed reading it
Leran Vakem

Posted 16 Years Ago


Good poem.
Yes days come and go
and we must move along with them.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

Posted 16 Years Ago


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good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Not bad at all for something you just jotted down in your math book. I really liked it! Good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The many math classes that have suffered boredom upon so many writers over the years. Days come, days go.

Posted 16 Years Ago


It seems very deep for something that was written out of boredom. Its length is thought provoking. Its mysterious. There few different lines bring unique things to the mind of the reader, but the poem itself isn't really choppy. I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 6, 2008

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Somewhere in the Alpes, France



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