OUR GOD

OUR GOD

A Poem by Ariana

God created this world in 6 days
While We created a war in 1 day
God rested the seventh day
While We fought everyday
God brought prophets to the world
While We brought enemies to our world
God said spread the word 
While we spread cruel words
Now all he ask is for peace 
But all we do is hurt humanities 
Is this going to be a ever lasting thing?

© 2011 Ariana


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Nice poem. We pray for peace and love between ourselves.
But power and greed stand in the way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this also has great meaning. I only hope and pray for peace to all one day. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well put. You sum things up just right. And the question at the end is one that each and every one of us has to ask ourselves. It is how we respond individually that will determine the answer. Well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ariana
Ariana

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