Tonight

Tonight.
As I lay dying, tell me every word
you wish you had ever said.
Even if they are laced with hate.
Even if my eyes fill with dread.

Hold nothing back.
Even if I look blue.
Tell me how much you hate me.
I know it's true.

Tell me, how you wish I had never come around.
How you regret they day you told me you loved me.
How I'm always just a clown.

Make sure you say the words loud.
Make sure you say them clear.
After tonight, I won't be around.
Won't annoy you, my dear.

Tonight.
As I lay dying, break the rest of my heart.
Didn't your mother teach you,
to finish what you start?

©5-28-2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Fantastic Ash gripping!!but return the love I send you non review!!! Hmmmmm!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I'll review your stuff soon. Scout's honor!

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Another intense write, Ashley clearly aimed at the breaker of that heart... "didn't your mother teach you to finish what you start?" - such powerful words...

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you FT... I honestly didn't realize how powerful this write was until after it was down on paper..

[AaronFreitas]

"Hold nothing back.
Even if I look blue.
Tell me how much you hate me.
I know it's true."

A desperate plea for truth and honesty... you expressed that very well in this write Nikki. I loved it!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you Aaron... A million thoughts in my head.. A million and one in my heart..

[AaronFreitas]

You know I'm always here for you... not just a friend on here... always your friend :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thanks a million Aaron! You know I'm here for you, too! You've got my #, you know how to find me!