Sunny Saturday Bride

This piece just stemmed from a scene in my mind. It might be a bit much for some readers.

A sunny Saturday morning.

Bells chiming in the air.

Today, she’s going to get married.

Say the words, “I Do”, without care.

 

A sunny Saturday morning,

Curls in her hair.

She slips on her wedding dress,

Rushing to get there.

 

He waits for her,

With bated breath.

Hands slick with sweat,

Standing at the altar.

 

A sunny Saturday morning,

A body in the road.

Blood staining a white dress,

A bouquet of roses in her palm.

 

Vows left unsaid.

A love left undone.

On a sunny Saturday morning,

A bride got overrun.

 

©4-1-2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[~]

some scary image you had in your mind girl! fits a good fireside story :)

[Cool Girl]

Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! That's all I can say!!! I loved this so much!!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I'm glad you liked it. It freaked my brother out! Lol.

[Cool Girl]

Lol get him to join this site! I think he'd love it here!!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

He doesn't like to read. I had to force him to read this one! Lol!

[Cool Girl]

Oh....I love reading!! :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Me too, psychic twin. Me, too.

[Nini]

Holy Crap! I wasn't expecting that...I like a good read that surprises me!!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yes! Just what I was aiming for! I'm glad it worked. Glad you liked it.

[FREE_BIRD]

i like during reading ... thanks for the request by if i missed it than obviously i also missed enjoying...
a scence describe is not natural but if the bride over excited than she is going to over act obviouslly

[andrew mitchell]

This is like a wicked limerick type write with a horror twist lol. Nice enjoyable even funny the way you expressed the death lol.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you very much. I really like this piece. Lol.

[AaronFreitas]

Good work Ashley : I like this piece

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thanks Aaron. I don't know where this came from, but it was just there.