Wow, this poem really touch my heart
Its like saying: "I accept you just the way you are"
Touching piece, this really got to my hear.
But it is true, we don't have to pay attention to the past, because the past is the past, nothing more, nothing less, what matters is what those people have become for us in the present.
A poem that was worth reading, really, you did a great job
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This is a very touching poem. I can feel the emotions bleeding out of every line, and the font color you used adds even more to it. This is truly wonderful :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much. It always makes me happy to hear the reader say things like that!
Wow, this poem really touch my heart
Its like saying: "I accept you just the way you are"
Touching piece, this really got to my hear.
But it is true, we don't have to pay attention to the past, because the past is the past, nothing more, nothing less, what matters is what those people have become for us in the present.
A poem that was worth reading, really, you did a great job
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I had a friend named John.. He was 17 and training to go into the Navy. I lost his number and miss him so much. I used to try to tell him not to join because I didn't want him to get hurt. I wish that I was able to tell him now that I was really proud of him. His favorite song was "Demons" by Imagine Dragons. Every time I hear that song, I think of him and my eyes tear up.. He was the one I looked up to. He was my hero..
I love your poem! This poem reminds me of him.. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you. My friend john doesn't know I wrote this for him yet.. We haven't talked in ages. I need .. read moreThank you. My friend john doesn't know I wrote this for him yet.. We haven't talked in ages. I need to find a way to get this to him.. I'm sorry about your friend sis! chin up!
Hi there! I'm Ari!
♥ A member of NSCS (National Society of Collegiate Scholars) and Alpha Sigma Pi. I graduated with a BA in English in 2019. Studied Psychology at UoPX, and am currently a Ma.. more..