Revolving Existence

When someone is constantly on your brain . . .

 

In my eyes, you're above all others.

Perfection, at it's finest.

Nothing compares to you.

No one else, in this world, could do.

Everywhere I see you.

Every scene in a movie.

Every page of a magazine.

Every piece of every puzzle,

adorns your face.

Your existence makes

my world go 'round.

I wish I could touch you,

hold you, kiss you.

Whisper in your ear.

But I'm sure that as

each day goes by,

I never cross your mind.

It's unfair,

when all you do is fill up mine.

©1-4-2015 By Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

Everything is fair in love and war :). I'll tell you something, there will also be someone who will be thinking about you constantly.. unable to get you out of his head and wondering - "why is life unfair"?. Life is unfair.. We will have to accept it and move on :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Having a crush on someone can drive you insane… that is why we must take chances and tell them cause life is too short and we regret the chances we didn't take more that the mistakes we make.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I agree. I learned that lesson in life early. There was a guy I liked in school. We became friends but I never told him I like him more than that, when I was 17 he died from an accidental overdose.. I visit his grave whenever I can, but it kills me that I didn't tell him...

[Aishika Basu]

Your poem reminded me of Idealism where God is ubiquitous.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Is that good or bad? Lol

[Aishika Basu]

Well, I don't want to make any direct comment. What I can tell you, I really enjoyed it. And I think your poem is challenging one, quite modern in its style. So, you may be a promising writer, I think. Best of luck, have a nice day. :) Aishika.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Um. Thank you, I think..

[Aishika Basu]

lol...i think....