Always

Always

A Poem by Aren
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I count the pulses My heart beats upon my neck. Always too many Always too few. How is it that I compare to you?

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Isolate me to myself.
Though you can’t hear it,
    I still scream
Though they can’t see it,
    my eyes still gleam
Though I can’t bare it,
    I still dream.

Covering myself in blankets of trust
I feel cold and bare
In this world so full of lies.

I count the pulses
My heart beats upon my neck.
    Always too many
        Always too few.
How is it that I compare to you?

You please just like raindrops.
    I am wretched tears.
You are so heroic.
    I am itching with fears.
Your mind is working smoothly.
    I’ve lost some of my gears.
Almost godly you seem:

so majestic,
so eternal.
I am dying one of these days.
    Always too late.
    Always too soon.

© 2012 Aren


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Aren
Please let me know what you think. I am open to criticism and honesty.

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Covering myself in blankets of trust
I feel cold and bare
In this world so full of lies.

This stanza, sticks out and so truthful really, Nice job writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've missed you. the emotion you put into your writes is always thought provoking and leaves the reader with a what next feel. you also manage to take more than one perspective from the point you make and do it beautifully, as ever..

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a really interesting poem. Very emotional and touching as well, but nonetheless very well written. Kudos to you.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Aren
Aren

Streamwood, IL



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Hello my name is Andrea. I am 20 years old, but please do not stereotype me for being young or a girl. Poetry is a major aspect of my life, but I feel like all I have written so far is selfish an na.. more..

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