Rain it Falls

It's raining in here, so I figured, why not? And I'm SO in love with the rain.

Rain it Falls

Rain it falls, and I'm dancing in the rainbow,

Rain it falls, and it's whispering in my ear now,

Rain it falls, and it's brimming in my eyes,

Rain it falls, and everything is clear somehow.

 

Rain it falls, and it's drumming in my heart,

Rain it falls, and it's filling up my soul,

Rain it falls, and now it's lifting up my spirits,

Rain it falls, and it's swallowing me whole.

 

Rain it falls, and it's breaking up the sun,

Rain it falls, and I can't see you at all

Rain it falls, and it's making me forget everything

Rain it falls, and I'm letting it fall.

 

Rain it falls, and now we're dancing in the diamonds,

Rain it falls, and it's rushing in my vein,

Rain it falls, and everything is silent,

Rain it falls, and I'm falling in love again

 

 

Author's Note

It's might seem a bit, I don't know, vague, but please bear with me.

Reviews

[spunthestars]

I love this! It captured a lovely range of emotions.

[Areeba]

Thanks!!!

[Jazique]

Hmm.. it was nice and interesting. I mean to it seems like its saying evertime it rains the old shall wash away and a new thing shall begin like love, a new sound, a new soul, heart, and other things.

[Areeba]

Thank you!

[Coffee Vampier]

I do love it and i love the beauty and depth of it. I think It might have been better to just have said rain falls at the first of the section because the reader already knows that rain is falling and they dont need to be reminded all the time. (it gets redundant and is harder to read) Over all it was really well written :)

[Areeba]

Thanks!

[Coffee Vampier]

Np :)