Dreams

First it started off,

it was all clear.

Everything felt right,

being right here.

Being close to you,

that was my dream.

You and I,

the perfect team.

Soon we fell,

we started to crack.

You would yell,

and everything went black.

You'd ignore me,

I would sob and cry.

What did I do wrong?

What's the reason why?

You hit me;

I fell to the ground.

What's the point?

Are you happy now?

I've finally left now,

gone across the sea.

I still dream--

dream of the way we used to be.

Reviews

[ashesonfire]

Wow, this is a really sad poem! But very well written. I could definitely feel the emotion in this piece.

[ArebiIsNotOnFire]

Thank you. Most of my poems will be filled with emotion, because I think poems are best when the reader is almost washed away by strong emotions.

[ashesonfire]

Yes! It's just like music, when the artist really feels for the song it comes across way more powerful. The audience can really feel it, and it just pulls at your heartstrings!